This is my nine year old son's essay about lunch. It won first place in the 4th grade, in a county wide contest. :) My son, the journalist.
(spelling and grammatical errors have been left intact)
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11:10! It's time! We walk down the Hall. And then it hits you...PIZZA! you go crazy! you sit down, eat it, then you want more. But as always,NO! Here is a few things about lunch...
1. The food is good! Here are some I like...sherbet-comes with Pizza tray. flavors are two, rasberry or orange. Pizza- A main course meal. comes with fries.
2. you get to eat ice cream!
The ice cream you get is a variety. you may Get chocolate. you may get vanilla. But their both good! here is something me and some other kids do...get chocolate milk and put it on your ice cream.
3. the food you eat you will like. From spaghetti to chicken. Pretty much everythings good. Alot of kids love this food. and you will too!
Desert-lots of deserts are handed out on surprise. Maybe its ice cream. maybe its sherbert. or a cookie...you never know what you might get at lunch!
I am looking at the clock right now! Looky there, it's almost 11:10!
THE END
2 comments:
That is just absolutely adorable! He did a great job! I loved the last part especially... "Looky there, it's almost 11:10!" Too cute!
So this is weird. I thought for sure I commented on this, but apparently I'm losing my mind, in the Twilight Zone, or maybe it was because you talked to me on the phone about it. Anywho, this is so stinkin' cute. I love this story. Sounds like he's inherited your wonderful and amazing ability of story telling. :)
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